Comments on: Homework – Friday 13th November

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 17:26:29 +0000

A great couple of sentences, you have used some great adjectives and powerful verbs.

By: Jamie

Jamie — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 17:08:04 +0000

The dreadful, terrifying, smelly beast roamed the tiny village with scared people below his massive, enormous feet! The people looked like ants.

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 12:28:15 +0000

A great description Lewis, I’d hide too!

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 12:27:36 +0000

He sounds awful Ryan – I love it!

By: Ryan

Ryan — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 11:53:04 +0000

The green,terrifying, giant monster stomped through the woods with his orange spiky claws and dribbly disgusting mouth shouting I’m coming to get you.

By: Lewis B

Lewis B — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 10:27:03 +0000

The hairy, fierce and horrifying beast plods loudly sounding like a beating drum through the busy town because he wants to find a tasty person to eat. Everyone was afraid and ran quickly away from the threatening monster.

By: Isla.s.

Isla.s. — Thu, 19 Nov 2015 20:49:21 +0000

Very funny Regan!
You’re wonderful as well as the monster.

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 15 Nov 2015 19:12:33 +0000

I think Isla might be hiding Regan!

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 15 Nov 2015 19:12:13 +0000

Wow, he sounds very scary Daniel!

By: Daniel M

Daniel M — Sun, 15 Nov 2015 17:08:29 +0000

The furry, frightening beast that is as tall as a mountain can hurt people with its spiky arms and claws as sharp as knives.