Comments on: Homework 20-11-15

By: Lucy

Lucy — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 19:28:26 +0000

I love every comment Y3

WELL DONE

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 17:27:11 +0000

I love this Ewan, what a great pet!

By: Ewan Prior

Ewan Prior — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 17:09:16 +0000

I crept downstairs to see what could be making the noise. The box that Daddy had brought home was open but nothing was inside. There was a rustling in the tree. What could it be? The Christmas Turkey! The farmer mustn’t have killed it! I poked my head through the branches and as soon as it saw me we ran round the house as I tried to catch it. Mayhem!
By the time everyone came down on Christmas morning there were baubles and tinsel everywhere. The turkey and I were fast asleep on the couch!
That year we had beans on toast for Christmas Dinner and I now have a pet turkey, his name is …….. CRACKERS!

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 16:36:14 +0000

I love this Regan, you have a great imagination!

By: Regan Dunbar

Regan Dunbar — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 15:52:58 +0000

When I opened the big, white box a naughty elf dressed all in red and green jumped out and whizzed off towards the kitchen. I raced after him with the box. When I got to the kitchen the elf was reaching for the turkey and at the last second, I dived across the kitchen and plopped the box over his head. I shoved the lid on and tied the ribbon tight.
I needed to get him back to the North Pole, so quickly wrote a letter saying; “To Santa, I found a naughty elf hiding in a present. Could you please come and pick him up. With love, Regan xxx”
After that, I left it on the box under the Christmas tree and raced into my room and dived under the covers.

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 12:27:00 +0000

Wonderful Lewis, I can see powerful verbs, adjectives, adverbs and even one of this week’s spellings! Well done

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 12:25:53 +0000

Wow, great adjectives Ryan! Poor Mum, waking up to a mess on Christmas Day!

By: Ryan

Ryan — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 12:08:18 +0000

I woke up when I heard a bang! I crept downstairs then I found a Christmas hat on the floor. I wondered who’s hat it was. I then saw a trail of mince pie crumbs and suddenly I heard zzzzzzzz zzzzzzz snoring from the lounge. It was Father Christmas fast asleep on the couch and there was a box next to him with no lid on. I heard vroom vroom from under the stairs and I went to look and I saw a remote control car it must have been a present that escaped. The car was shiny and blue with flashing bright lights. It had made a mess and ran over the mince pie. I went back upstairs quietly and tried to go back to sleep but was too excited.

By: Lewis B

Lewis B — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 11:07:11 +0000

Wow Daniel your boots sound great. I want some of those!

By: Lewis B

Lewis B — Sun, 22 Nov 2015 11:05:30 +0000

I crept downstairs on Christmas morning and opened the door. I saw a flashing, yellow light rising from a box under the tree. I peered into the box and a racing car shot out and started speeding around the room. I tried to catch it but it was too fast. Eventually it started to slow down because the batteries were running out. I picked up the box and threw it over the car and quickly put the lid back on. When it was quiet I opened the box and to my surprise the box was empty! Was it a dream or was it not?