Comments on: Homework – 27.11.15

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 20:53:31 +0000

What a lovely description Lucy, some great adjectives

By: Lucy

Lucy — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 19:08:20 +0000

The tiny mouldy green dragon was sitting in my smooth hand. He was trying to blow fire, so I gave him some magical medisan. He took a big, deep breath through his lungs and burning red hot fire came shooting out of his mouth. I felt amazing because it was my secret dragon.

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 18:53:35 +0000

That’s lovely Matilda

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 18:53:05 +0000

Wow William! I love your similes, are you sure you can’t let me have some of the magic dust in return for some golden tickets?

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 18:52:10 +0000

A good description Isla

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 18:51:39 +0000

Well done Sam, I love the way you grow and shrink your dragon

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 18:50:40 +0000

Great description Daniel, although I’m not sure it’s a good idea to have a pongy dragon under your bed!

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 18:49:45 +0000

A secret dragon at school, I love it!

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 18:49:11 +0000

Great adjectives! Remind me not to eat popping candy in the future Dylan!

By: Mrs Fairhurst

Mrs Fairhurst — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 18:48:36 +0000

I think we’d all eat Haribo if we could Lewis!